Looking good so far! Is the whole bluish area alpha editable? Which skirt mesh is underneath?
The only real feedback I have is stuff that you may already have planned to tweak-- the hem seems to abruptly tuck in rather than falling naturally to the floor, and it's hard to tell, but the... upper chest area (neck, shoulders, decollete) looks like it might be a little high up off the body underneath. I know it can't be right up against the 'skin,' but I'm a little worried apron strings and shoulder straps would noticeably hover, as-is.
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The only real feedback I have is stuff that you may already have planned to tweak-- the hem seems to abruptly tuck in rather than falling naturally to the floor, and it's hard to tell, but the... upper chest area (neck, shoulders, decollete) looks like it might be a little high up off the body underneath. I know it can't be right up against the 'skin,' but I'm a little worried apron strings and shoulder straps would noticeably hover, as-is.