Sorry it took so long to get back to this, school's been absorbing my time.
I've been adjusting this on and off for the past couple weeks and it really isn't looking any better to my eyes. The pelvis clipping doesn't seem to go away no matter how I tweak things, or the back edge trails weird, or the opacity goes bonkers, and I can't get the jagged edge in the middle to go away. We may have to leave the bone assignments/weird alpha opacity of this project to somebody cooler than I. :(